As you know, the Olympic Games have started over in Rio. We will use this great festival of sport for our prompt this week.
It is:
Things to consider:
- Which sport is this? RUNNING SPORT
- What might be going to happen? SOMEONE WILL WIN
- How do you feel? EXCITED AND HAPPY
I could see the finish line, then someone said ON YOUR MARKS. GET SET .GO, and then I ran as fast as I could. There was only 200 meters. I thought that there was not much time left to reach the front of the runner then my ears really started to hurt because people were calling my name LEILA, LEILA, LEILA. When there was only 100 metres to go I had to go faster because someone else was in the lead. I just said to myself Leila, you can do this and with only 5 more seconds to go I out in more effort and I went past the finish line. I could believe that I actually won. I was so proud of myself, yay. Then I got given a beautiful golden medal, yay .
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Kia Ora Leila my name is Levi C I'm from Grey Main School I love your Olympics Writing maybe next time you could work on some more full stops.
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